Prof Haddad's 210 Class

Lexicon

Single line underneath – nice wording, source, quote or fact

Yellow highlighting – awkward wording or syntax (notation above is another problem involved)

Strikethrough – wordy

AWK - Awkward syntax

BLO- Belaboring the obvious

CS - Comma Splice

?? - Unclear

ILC - Illogical construction

FP - Flying penguins, meaning factual incorrect or not believable

WT – wooden tongue (stiff, or academic language)

MBH – My Brain Hurts! (too many ideas crammed into sentence or graph)

TPI - TERMPAPER-ITIS

NS – non sequitur

WWS - watch what you’re saying

SG - Sweeping generalization

BS – Be specific

JJ – Jabberwocky (writing makes no sense)

RR – Rutro, Rastro (wrong word)

GGM – Great Guggily Muggily (excessive)

RC – repetitive construction

DD – dangling modifier

PPG – ping-ponging

PV – passive voice

SS – style error

PN – punctuation error

SW – show me

G – grammatical error

VV – vague

OXX – too obvious

RSS – run on sentence

RT - rough transition between grafs or ideas